I have a game for you! It's called finish this song!
While I was songwriting today, I got stopped after the first chorus, determining the direction I want to take the second verse. I have a few ideas of 'what's in the corner' listed below. Comment below with which idea you like best! OR feel free to add your own!
PS: My voice is a little tempered from allergies and my guitar tempos vary, haha. Just go with it. The words are below.
Lyrics:
She storms into the garage.
She doesn't know what he's got going on.
Only anger on her mind
cause he's an hour past the fix-it time.
She storms into the garage.
She doesn't know what he's got going on.
Only anger on her mind
cause he's an hour past the fix-it time.
To her, he's just a mechanic
and her time is more important.
She doesn't see it in the corner
Hidden by the years of dirt and dust.
But no one's just a mechanic.
and her time is more important.
She doesn't see it in the corner
Hidden by the years of dirt and dust.
But no one's just a mechanic.
Options for verse 2: what's in the corner?
- Folded flag (from his Dad or son)
- Service awards (from armed services)
- Pictures of her (she's adopted and he's her biological father) WHAT?!
- Picture of his daughter, from whom the woman received a life saving organ.
- A picture of his pro race car and dusty trophies
- YOUR IDEA!
- Folded flag (from his Dad or son)
- Service awards (from armed services)
- Pictures of her (she's adopted and he's her biological father) WHAT?!
- Picture of his daughter, from whom the woman received a life saving organ.
- A picture of his pro race car and dusty trophies
- YOUR IDEA!
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